1.1.2 Quality Feedback

In this authentic feedback example, I am reviewing a student's work on a portion of their business plan. The business plan is developed in segments in order for the instructor to steer students in the right direction and intervene as needed as work is being developed. In this example, the student is working on the market plan portion of the business plan. Specific comments are made on the developing plan to encourage the student to think critically about the writing. Interpretive as well as descriptive comments are made to help the student develop this portion of the plan. In this example, the student emailed the instructor this portion of the plan and the instructor responded within 24 hours. The student was then able to make the appropriate corrections and resubmit within the designated time frame.